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my ears twich to the sound of screams,
my eyes are heavy and sore.
i feel this is one of those dreams ...
that i've had once before.

the sun has fallen behind the trees,
on the path that i walk.
i can't shake the pain in my knees,
hell, i can hardly talk.

blood runs down my chest,
i ran for miles on end.
i have done my very best.
victory, it's a god send.

survival of the fitest,
they always say.
i can never get this,
pain to go away.

every night i lay my head,
my eyes hurt, my mind screams.
i just want to go t bed,
but i hide from smple dreams.
©2009-2010 ~Wickedintents
:iconwickedintents:

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life is but a dream....

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:iconskylovermeg:
this is good... i like it, it is relate able ( im sure different for me but rateable) :)

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" i look back to the past, I lose today and see the future, as a lost sea"
:iconunspoken-misery0:
Baby...I don't know why you wrote this...I don't know what inspired you to write it...So do me a favor...AND LET ME KNOW :P You said all I had to do was ask...Guess what...I'M ASKING! LOL

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"Ivy, I want you to be mine"-she could hear the pain n his voice-"but you're not."
"I am!" she cried out loud.
"We're on different sides of a river," he said, "and its a river that neither of us can cross. U were meant 4 sum1 else."
"I was meant for U!"
:iconwickedintents:
just remembering past issues ive overcome, nothing to worry about... just when i used to be young and nieve baby. ill tell you more in person ok.

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i found this in pieces,
i fixed it for you...
its not perfect...
but its the best i could do"

@};-
:iconunspoken-misery0:
As always. It's always I'll tell you in person. I'll tell you when I'm alone I can't tell you this I can't tell you that...I'm beginning to wonder what all you're keeping from me...and if I need to worry about it.

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"Ivy, I want you to be mine"-she could hear the pain n his voice-"but you're not."
"I am!" she cried out loud.
"We're on different sides of a river," he said, "and its a river that neither of us can cross. U were meant 4 sum1 else."
"I was meant for U!"
:iconwickedintents:
baby, really you want me to place my life on the net... should i have my medical records here too so i can write them out also... think what you want i cant change that but dont make shit up i tell you it all anyhow, god forbid i keep one thing from you that i am not proud of.... i tell you the truth on everything else just thought you would understand this one time... but i am sorry once again i fail.

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i found this in pieces,
i fixed it for you...
its not perfect...
but its the best i could do"

@};-
:iconunspoken-misery0:
Yes...but you can always tell me when you are alone like by yourself...Or email me or something like that....Ya know...I don't like that there are any type of secrets between us...If I've made it this far without leaving you....THEN I NEVER WILL! LOL

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"Ivy, I want you to be mine"-she could hear the pain n his voice-"but you're not."
"I am!" she cried out loud.
"We're on different sides of a river," he said, "and its a river that neither of us can cross. U were meant 4 sum1 else."
"I was meant for U!"
:iconwickedintents:
just past that i am not proud of ...

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i found this in pieces,
i fixed it for you...
its not perfect...
but its the best i could do"

@};-
:iconunspoken-misery0:
I'm not proud of half my past...but that doesn't stop me from telling you.

--
"Ivy, I want you to be mine"-she could hear the pain n his voice-"but you're not."
"I am!" she cried out loud.
"We're on different sides of a river," he said, "and its a river that neither of us can cross. U were meant 4 sum1 else."
"I was meant for U!"
:iconwickedintents:
your not me love i cope with things differently. let me time to get it out and soon enough you'll understand

--
i found this in pieces,
i fixed it for you...
its not perfect...
but its the best i could do"

@};-
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